Question

following paragraph has not been edited there is an EA land at the error along with its correction in the space provided for spending time for the kids s immediate as long as last third gain for children according to a fourth research the children of concerned parents are more efficient needed real answer​

Answer 1

Answer:

Spending time with their kids brings an immediate as well as long-last gain for parents. According to research, children with concern with parents are more efficient.​

Explanation:

"for" is replaced by "with" as with is a more suitable preposition in the given passage.

"an" article is used instead of "for", and "a" article is removed from the line "According to research" as it was not needed there.

The first form of "concern" is used as it is present perfect tense.