English, asked by slayer2, 1 year ago

guys just wanna ask you about how is the story please read it and tell me is it ok for a eng. teacher please im in a trouble i have wrote it but doesn't know how it or is it funny ?? it should be sensible ya!! so please tell me that is ut Please !!

giving out points just to help it me somewords . please

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Answered by PalakVerma1

Wow ! What a story!!

slayer2: can i ask you something related to q.

PalakVerma1: sure

slayer2: how many pages are there ??

slayer2: on my posted q.

PalakVerma1: just one page

slayer2: oh!! i posted three can i get one more favor !! 2 more q.are there the q.you ans.is ending..DI please help me by ans.those 2 too.please

PalakVerma1: Ok

slayer2: Thanks di

Answered by Candy47

Hey guy , it's a good story.
But it could be better if you use past tense in the story. Because a story is always written in past tense.
Hope my suggestion will help you...

slayer2: there is some places where i used past tenses but in some place i hadnt:-D

slayer2: did it effect my marks??

slayer2: :-|

slayer2: too?

Candy47: Yes it will affect your marks as story is always written in past tense

slayer2: (+_+) oh god

slayer2: thanks yaa !! for helping me out from this imp.reason

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