Question

Having finished college and than
a shorthand course, I was hiring as
Secretary on the editor of a
Magazine .now I had an job and
An apartment in Delhi. It has a heaven
For a women by a small town


The above passage is not edited
And I want the answer of this
Plssss help me

Answer 1

answer in what sense....???

Answer 2

Answer:

The edited paragraph is presented below : Having finished college and then a shorthand course, I was hired as secretary by the editor of a magazine. Now I had a job and an apartment in Delhi. It was a heaven for a woman from a small town. I was hiring is wrong andis ……replaced by I was hired. Secretary on the editor……… is replaced by secretory by the editor .Now I  had…….. is replaced by Now I had .An apartment  in Delhi….is replaced by an apartment in Delhi.It has a heaven For a women by a small town ………is replaced by   It was a heaven for a woman from a small.

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