Question

Hey fab ,

I'm just looking for a decent English structure of writing .

So , show your writing skill by writing about this topic :-

" First interaction with your crush " .

Better writing skill will be marked Brainliest !!

Thanks :D

Answer 1

Hey


Lemme show you mine ↓↓

It's my real story .

04th May , 2016 , I , standing in a queue with boredom and loss of zeal doing my work of karate having a strict teacher , who just gives a hard shot on leg when looks anyone sleepy or whatever . I had fear of him as he punished me along with my friends once and gave work of doing pushups and trust me I a not a guy interest in making abs and all . So , it was quite hard for me .

I was doing just practice with my friend when I saw a girl talking with our warden about anything . She seemed new to me but I couldn't see her face but back was fantastic .

She then turned and started moving in search of class . She just passed me and I could see her beauty . Her lips turned in deaperate to find her class . Well , I wanted to ask but feared for punishment once more .

I thaught it as sge was senior , as I was in class IX th at that time but as per I know student don't change school after having IXth . I , till , was looking at her and my punch now became loose which had to be hard for practice .

She found to be aheading towards our class and i felt happy and seemed curious too . And then my Friend , Harsh , from back told me like as :- " bhai , itna mat dekh . Apne class ki hai , dekh liyo jee bhar ke . Abhi maar khilwayega kya . " By hearing this , I was like on seventh heaven and just waiting for bell to ring as fast as it could .

But I don't know why , I looked till she entered in class . The what came in my mind was quite different . I then thaught :- " Kaun si chakkar mein pad raha hoon , do study and leave all moh maya " .

But that words were the satisfaction of getting in the same class .

This was the first interaction .

Story continues ...


thanks :)

Keep loving , keep smiling !!

Answer 2

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04th May , 2016 , I, standing in a queue with boredom and loss of zeal doing my work of karate having a strict teacher, who just gives a hard shot on leg when looks anyone sleepy or whatever. I had fear of him as he punished me along with my friends once and gave work of doing pushups and trust me la not a guy interest in making abs and all. So, it was quite hard for me.

I was doing just practice with my friend when I saw a girl talking with our warden about anything. She seemed new to me but I couldn't see her face but back was fantastic.

She then turned and started moving in search of class. She just passed me and I could see her beauty . Her lips turned in deaperate to find her class . Well , I wanted to ask but feared for punishment once more.

I thaught it as sge was senior, as I was in class IX th at that time but as per I know student don't change school after having IXth . I, till, was looking at her and my punch now became loose which had to be hard for practice.

entered in class. The what came in my mind was quite different. I then thaught :- " Kaun si chakkar mein pad raha hoon , do study and leave all moh maya ".