English, asked by bluemoonwolf, 11 months ago

heyy mates!!!

I've written a poem for a great event which is being held in our school

please give opinion....

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◇.•● BUT WAIT ●•.◇

There I was!
with all my colleagues...
going through the green woods

But wait!
what's that!

An immense tree with watery petals
came in our way...
Some appreciated, some were astonished
but I....I just stood as a stone and stared the watery petals
and enjoying the blissful air blowing

Just looking and looking the leaves...

the woods turned from green to yellow and from yellow to brown...
but I m still there...
enjoying the changing colours of nature

but wait!
What happened!

where are all the leaves gone?
Ohh!
it's autumn season...

now there's nothing much to see
let's move on...

But Wait!
Where are my colleagues?
Ohh!
They moved on..
Now I m all alone..
alone in the silence that no one can break
alone at a place where no one can hear me
alone at a place which cannot be discovered

I will have to move on alone....

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Answers

Answered by Anonymous
8

Explanation:

nice poem ...

carry on...

you are much talented ...

your this poem is lovely

just think on your ideas with more time ....

all the very best ....

Answered by ItzPalak
15

Answer:

Hey❤❤❤

siso ❤❤❤

↪↪↪↪your poem is so amazing. .. .. .. .

N be creative like this and best wishes for your lovely future.

missing uhh a lot. .

TC. .. ❤❤❤❤❤

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