Question

hi Everyone
guys, I have to write one formal letter so I have written it now you have to check it and if it is wrong then please please please write and tell me and if it's correct then also write and tell me please please please tell me

and there are two photos the one in which I wrote and another one in which question is there

so please please tell me

Answer 1

yes it is correct just add a bit more info about the bike so that it is easy for the police to find..

thanks!!

#aashi

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Answer 2

I have corrected the grammatical errors in your letter and have rewritten it. Please do check it once again!

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Gandhipuram, Whitefield
Bangalore, Karnataka

23rd October, 2018

Whitefield Police Station
Beside Prestige Meadows
Whitefield Main Road
Whitefield, Bangalore
Karnataka - 560066

Sir
Subject: Theft of bicycle

It is to bring to your kind notice that my bicycle has been stolen today, on 23rd October, 2018. My bicycle was parked outside my house.

The details of the bicycle include the following: It is a 3 month old black-coloured bicycle.

Kindly register a F.I.R. so that the guilty be punished.

Thanking you

Yours faithfully
Abhimanyu Singh