English, asked by TheMoonlìghtPhoenix, 1 month ago

Holaaa Pupils!!
Topic - Creative Writing.

Imagine yourself as an astronaut who, on his/her way to Saturn, has lost the route. Suddenly, you're blanked out (mention the reason) and land up in Super Earth!

Write what you're going to do if you are the first person to reside there! Everything is the same, even the continents, but you're the only person there.


TheMoonlìghtPhoenix: What is Super Earth?
: It is a planet similar to Earth.
TheMoonlìghtPhoenix: In a nutshell - Write your experiences being the first person in Super Earth. What changes will you bring about, will you allow entry of people etc.
If any confusion, please DM, I'll clarify.. but yes, No spams -_-

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Answered by Anonymous
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Hello! I'm Emelia. I have a Story of mine to share, A little crazy One though..

Me, An Ordinary Girl's Dream, Of Meeting The moon, Came true, but fate, Went Beyond that.. I Had a Risky Mission Where I Had to Travel to Saturn. i Wasn't Ready for the Big..Day, After all it was my first time. The day arrived. My heath status, My SpaceSuit etc.. Was checked. Then, For the Big launch, I Bid A farewell to my family who was down there, Watching me go. And, 10..9.. 2..1 GO!! it Wasn't pretty Good At the beginning But was fine in the mid-way. after a While, I had a strange feeling.. I Just sensed Something going wrong. Everything was the Same Outside, But.. it felt Strange. I contacted the crew below, If they were tracking me, To let me know if things are fine. 30 seconds later, I Had a voice message saying I'm Going on the Wrong route, And they hadn't realized until now, i Was completely frozen, I tried finding the Right path, But i just Couldn't, I began to fear as hell. I was blank, I tried to contact crew, Again to guide me. But, I Got no response, I realized.. I Lost contact.. I Almost got sick. then, Suddenly, Bad luck was behind me, My Space Ship Shook, Shook worst than an earthquake. I Didn't Know, What was wrong... I Tried To Figure it out, but it was too late before I fell to the ground With a Loud Crash. And after a While. Not sure, What happened, Not knowing Where i am, Different emotions.. Well, Coming back to where i was, It was rather a strange place... kinda Similar to earth.. For a moment, I thought i safely landed on earth.. Yet, Doubtful, The place was full of rocks.. And smoke sort-of-thingy. I hoped i'd Get help. I began growing a lil weak.. As I hurt myself during The thud/Crush I had nothing to do, Absolutely Bored, Helpless, And.. Weak. Days.. passed. I started to explore the Place. Went a Few miles and miles, To figure out Where the hell was I ? I went on, no one was there.. except for me. it looked Like Earth. At least a little. That is when it stuck, I thought "Could it— no,no.. or.. maybe? am I on super-earth?" that is when, I Got a little Excited, I went lil more further, More and more. Things were very similar to our planet,But just without Buildings and more trees, more i saw was rocks! So, i decided to divert, Rather than Just.. cry or worry for help! i Wanted to do something, you know, I won't Even know, Which day I am, Just my assumptions.. So, All I used to do, Was stare at The Space... The stars.. and absolutely nothing, So.. I decided i'd Do something.. So, as the First Person On "SUPER-EARTH" i was a little, Happy!

This was my only chance to See this Planet, but I was exhausted. And Do Absolutely nothing. I was, Desperately waiting and hoping for help too..

Lost Contact from earth, Wrecked my space ship, Very Exhausted and need Help, Absolutely nothing I Could do.. I became Lifeless. I Wanted to Explore the place, You know. So, I set off For sight Seeing. And trust me, It was boring. of course, It was similar to Earth, the gravitational pull, water, Rocks, Rocks, more rocks! it went to be boring. that made me more unwell. I decided to do nothing. I sat down at a place, Looking at the sky (Or.. space) Thinking about my parents, My family, And missing earth.

Days later, I saw a Some spaceship, It looked like a Tiny Ant in the sky. I Waved at it, And the Astronaut in it Saw me, I realized..that they were searching me For ages, I went in and sat down, And Safely landed on home sweet home, Earth!

I saw myself in the news, Headlines, "First person to land on the Super-earth!, And it's true!!". I was recovering my heath and all.. and Now, i'm perfectly All right!

So, that's how, My adventure ended.. maybe Not a Adventure..? Okay, I'll take that as an Adventure.

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I might not have a Creative brain, But.. hope this'll do.


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Answered by Ladylaurel
86

Topic Creative Writing :-

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From the very childhood, I'm fond of reading, learning more about space. Yesterday, before going to sleep I was reading a book about space. At sleep, I dreamt an exciting adventurous dream which I realised later. I was an astronaut and was researching about the planet Saturn. Me and few more astronauts were doing this research together.

After researching, travelling on the way of Saturn suddenly. The rocket was moving downwards rapidly and we found a fault in the fins of rocket. One of the fin of rocket was losing the stability compared to others which made the rocket more heavy in the bottom side which was leading to on a wrong direction way but somehow we planned to do a safe landing for repairing.

As it was a long distance to Saturn and the rocket needs to be repaired soon, we saw a small blue coloured ball like planet from far. We were going nearer to the planet and thought to do the reparing there. The Super Earth!!

We landed safely and the repairers were reparing the the parts on the meantime I went to explore the planet a bit. While getting out from the rocket I found, Gravity is present and can walk easily. By hearing a sound, I went nearer and nearer, the sound hears like the continuous wave of sea and I went more confidently but also afraid a bit. Few metres away, I saw a sea which is surrounded by big rocks and trees. At sky, because of sun we can see the places, It seems I'm the first person who landed on the Super-Earth. Many things were similar to the Earth. After the rocket was repaired we went back on the route of Saturn. My will to research about the planet was increasing more and more, not this time but we'll research about this planet more deeply.

Thank you!


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