Question

how can i improve my poetry

Har baar meri wafffa ko
bwafayee hi mili

or vo jab bi mili
gairo k dammn me mili

Answer 1

kya khoob khela hai kismat ne humse khel,
hum intezaar karte reh Gaye,
bewafa, ab Ho gayi bohot daer,
ab Ho gayi bohot daer....
add these lines to your poetry...