Question

how can i improve my poetry. ..????


masjid me to muslim the
or gurdware me sikh
mandir geya to hindu the

muje to mahkhane me
alla prmata god dikha
wha dosto sbhi bandu the

Answer 1

It look greate in my perspective but here is tip's on how to write a poem !

Know Your Goal

Avoid Clichés

Avoid Sentimentality

Use Images

Use Metaphor and Simile

Use Concrete Words Instead of Abstract Words

Communicate Theme

Subvert the Ordinary

Rhyme with Extreme Caution

Revise, Revise, Revise

Answer 2

hey mate
I think u can improve ur poem by adding some feelings and reality to it and it's a nice poem indeed...