Question

how I can correct the sentence..

Some rules

Answer 1

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➡️1.Use Active Voice
here are some examples:

..Mary walked the dog
...The dog liked Mary.I
... did not like the dog.
➡️2.Sometimes you want to link two ideas with a second S+V+O combination. When you do, you need a coordinating conjunction. The new formula looks like this:

S+V+O, COORDINATING CONJUNCTION+S+V+O

Coordinating conjunctions are easy to remember with an acronymic mnemonic device:

FANBOYS

ForAndNorButOrYetSo
➡️3.use commas when there is a pause.
e.g 1I do not walk Mary's dog, nor do I wash him.
.2Mary fed her dog, and I drank tea.Mary feeds and walks her dog every day, but the dog is still hyperactive.
➡️4.Use a Serial Comma in a List
-Pets R Us has lizards, dogs, and birds.e.g

➡️5.Use the Semicolon to Join Two Ideas
Mary's dog is hyperactive; it won't stop barking or sit still.My heart is like a cup of Lapsang Souchong tea; it's bitter and smoky.Mary has to walk her dog every day; it is the most hyperactive dog anyone has ever seen.
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