Question

how it's look and how to make it perfect

Answer 1

body structure should look good and leg also

Answer 2

Aloha ! ☺️

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It's a well tried art from your side ..........hope you will continue to make so.....

Further , if the painting would look a bit more realistic then than would surely bring perfection to your painting......
Mainly , you need to give proper care to the legs ( which aren't looking perfect) .....
Lastly , the pencil shading should have proper curves , dark and light shadings.....I request you to look into the points mentioned by me....

#This would surely bring perfection to your art.....
✴️ Anyways , ignoring those parts rest are too good ✴️
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Hope it helps you....!✌️