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I am a traveler.<br /> I forgot my home,and the world is my shelter.<br />From volga via Mississippi I have seen volga's beauty.<br />from ottowa via Austria with dust of paris I got dirty.I carried the colors of Elloraand gifted far away in chicago city.listening couplets of Ghalib sitting on Tashcent's belfry.sitting on the tomb of Mark Twain ,i spoke about gorkytherefore I am a traveler.
world's people become family and family became foreigner


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nice but u can still use better words for fluency and better standard

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It was quite good!!

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You're a good writer...