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I completed my graduation and Post graduation in finance Specialization. so I got job by campus interview so I selected in good company. I work as find accounting officer. I got good package. I do night shift. in 2019 I got married and I have little baby boy. so I I m worried about my night shift job and handling my baby. so I m trying switch job in reputed company. but my English is not good so I joined Josh app I learned English by Josh app and build my English thanks. please correct this story​

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