English, asked by durgeshsharma5196, 7 months ago

I.The following paragraphs have not been edited. Identify the error in each line and write it along with the correction in the provided blanks:

1.Anne is in need of a true friend with

who she can share her joys and (1) ______

sorrows. She has loving parent and about (2)

thirty people whom she can call friend. (3)

When she is with his friends she (4)

could talk about matters of everyday (5)

but cannot share her feelings.

2. Mulla Nasiruddin or two other travellers stopped to eat (1)

there packed lunch. One of the travellers bragged, (2)

“I only eat roasted, salted pistachios, cashews and dates.”

The other said, “Well, I only eat dried salmon.” Then all men (3)

looked at Nasiruddin, waiting to hear what he will say. (4)

Seconds late, Nasiruddin held up a piece of bread and (5)

confidently announced, “Well, I only ate wheat, ground up (6)

and carefully mix with water, yeast and salt, (7)

and than baked at the proper temperature (8)

with the proper time.” (9)

3. Luxor written Instrument Co. (1)

had introduced Excel 100 (2)

permanent marker. A product (3)

has many unique features like (4)

the dry safe ink which may (5)

write smooth and without (6)

drying, even if a marker is (7)

left capped for 24-36 hours. (8)

This is a best pen available. (9)

4. Health precedes action. There are an (1)

undisputed connection among being (2)

fit and being our best. A simple rules (3)

of ‘five’ helps make exercising a most (4)

enjoyable activity. Wake up in 5 a.m., do (5)

five stretches and five yoga asanas.

5. Thieves held the manager at the (1)_ __

Blue Star Hotel on gun point (2) _ __

last night during the daring raid (3) _

in which they took near one lakh (4)

rupees from the hotel safe. He also (5) ________

broke into several of the bedrooms.

Answers

Answered by Anonymous

Explanation:

I.The following paragraphs have not been edited. Identify the error in each line and write it along with the correction in the provided blanks:

1.Anne is in need of a true friend with

who she can share her joys and (1) ____________ ____________

sorrows. She has loving parent and about (2) ____________ ____________

thirty people whom she can call friend. (3) ____________ ____________

When she is with his friends she (4) ____________ ____________

could talk about matters of everyday (5) ____________ ____________

but cannot share her feelings.

2. Mulla Nasiruddin or two other travellers stopped to eat (1) ____________ ____________

there packed lunch. One of the travellers bragged, (2) ____________ ____________

“I only eat roasted, salted pistachios, cashews and dates.”

The other said, “Well, I only eat dried salmon.” Then all men (3) ____________ ____________

looked at Nasiruddin, waiting to hear what he will say. (4) ____________ ____________

Seconds late, Nasiruddin held up a piece of bread and (5) ____________ ____________

confidently announced, “Well, I only ate wheat, ground up (6) ____________ ____________

and carefully mix with water, yeast and salt, (7) ____________ ____________

and than baked at the proper temperature (8) ____________ ____________

with the proper time.” (9) ____________ ____________

3. Luxor written Instrument Co. (1) ____________ ____________

had introduced Excel 100 (2) ____________ ____________

permanent marker. A product (3) ____________ ____________

has many unique features like (4) ____________ ____________

the dry safe ink which may (5) ____________ ____________

write smooth and without (6) ____________ ____________

drying, even if a marker is (7) ____________ ____________

left capped for 24-36 hours. (8) ____________ ____________

This is a best pen available. (9) ____________ ____________

4. Health precedes action. There are an (1) ____________ ____________

undisputed connection among being (2) ____________ ____________

fit and being our best. A simple rules (3) ____________ ____________

of ‘five’ helps make exercising a most (4) ____________ ____________

enjoyable activity. Wake up in 5 a.m., do (5) ____________ ____________

five stretches and five yoga asanas.

5. Thieves held the manager at the (1)___________ ____________

Blue Star Hotel on gun point (2) ___________ ____________

last night during the daring raid (3) ___________ ____________

in which they took near one lakh (4) __________ ____________

rupees from the hotel safe. He also (5) __________ ____________

broke into several of the bedrooms.

Answered by rakhiagarwalthra

Explanation:

he following passage has not been edited .There is an error in each line. Find the error and

write the correct one in your notebook: [1/2x4=2]

Incorrect correct

Health precedes action. There are an a) ______ ______

undisputed connection among being b) ______ ______

fit and being our best. A simple rules c) ______ _______

of ‘five’ helps make exercising a most d) ______ ______

Health precedes action. There are an (1) ____________ ____________