Question

i wrote a poem give review

When I back from that war
Which was so far
And too not have any car
Pretend to see you again
Cause i'm insane

But you not there
In this blue sea
And I ask do you remember me
And when I said My name you reply maybe
I can't expected that you too
Forget me
Cause you had promised to stay forever
With me
Now weather you here or not I still want you happy

Live a life like you love
Cause you are an angle from above
I still not able to believe that
You you left me so soon
Its a night without any moon
Its a night of June

Well maybe my love and heart is weak
That's why our bond is break and you have no time to speak
I just in a week
I'll left for Greek

And I know
You don't remember me

Today is gusty
tomorrow will windy
Cause my yesterday is stormy
And you not remember me
#Aion-13
- CosmicAbhishek

Answer 1

awesome ..........liked it.....loved it.
your creativity and thinking skills is awesome..

Answer 2

nice poem.... just try to match more rhyming words and except it it is fabulous.