Question

Identify a successful thesis. Topic: A compare/contrast essay about two cities.

Answer 1

It were the days of summer vacation. I , along with some of my friends had decided to go on trekking and honking in Nepal. We did not think it to be as adventurous as it turned out later on. We were stuck in between a gap of two mountains while trying our climbing the mountains. We remained there for more than three hours stuck till ,as we were lucky, one lady happened to be around there for some fuel. She took us out and warned us not to venture into mountains without a proper guide. We thanked her and within no time decided to be back home.