Question

Identify error

Having finished college and than
a shorthand course, I was hiring as
secretary on the editor of a
magazine. Now I had an job and
an apartment in Delhi. It was a heaven
for a woman by a small town.

Answer 1

line 1= replace than with then

line 2= replace hiring with hired

line 3= replace on with of

line 4= replace an with a

line 5= there is no need of a

line 6= replace by with from

i hope this helped

Answer 2

Answer:

Having finished college and then (Than signifies a comparison but here, after college, she has done a shorthand course) a shorthand course, I was hired (The appropriate tense will be hired and not hiring) as a secretary to (this means that the girl is the secretary of the editor) the editor of a magazine.

Now I had a(article) job and an apartment in Delhi.

It was a heaven for a woman from a small town.