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In our socity many youngesters wondering for getting jobs.They only like" white colar"jobs.There are plenty of business opportunities(self employment).
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Answer 1

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In our society,youngsters are wandering for job opportunities,preferably the "whit collar jobs",while there are plenty of self employment opportunities in the business field.

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Answer 2

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In our society, youngsters are wandering for job opportunities, preferably the "white collar jobs", while there are plenty of self employment opportunities in the business field.  

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