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it was the Story about an 31-year-old man name, charlie. Beside, this is a psychological story


that refer to the subway at the grand central railway station which took passengers from

Galesburg.
In addition, this subway become the interconnection among the narrator’s harsh
reality but fantasy.
moreover the third level was a way for escape for Charlie. As life in the

modern world are full of uncertainties worries and stress, it take Charlie to a different world that

her friend also calls, “a walking dream wish fulfilment.” Further, a story was about Charlie’s

tendency to escape in the world. Most importantly, the third level starts since of sam’s letter

wrotten in 18th July 1984. This story show the connection in time and space. Through the third

level, a writer wants to escaped from the modern world in peaceful and quite old times.​

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It is a story about a 31- year old man named, Charlie. Besides this a psychological story which refers to the subway at the Grand Central railway which carry passengers from Galesburg. In addition, this subway became the interconnection of the narrator harsh reality but fantasy, moreover the third level was an easy way to escape for Charlie. As his life in the modern world are full of uncertainties, worries and stress, it took Charlie to a different world that his friend also called, "A walking dream wish fulfilment". Further, a story was about Charlie:s tendency to escape the world, most importantly the third level had started since Sam's letter was written in 18th July 1984. This story shows the connection of time in space. Through the third level, narrator wants to escape from the modern world to peaceful and quite old times.

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