Question

Last week, I had to travel from Patna to Gaya. For that, I booked a shared cab. It picked me from my residence and later, two more people were also picked. In one another introduction, I got to know about each other's professions. There was a gentlewoman, who was a recently qualified doctor and another one was a gentleman, who was an experienced machinist. They both were quite kind looking. The driver told us that it would take maximum one and a half hour to reach our destination. We talked to each other and discussed many professional matters. After half an hour, our car got suddenly stopped. The driver tried to restart, but he was unable to restart it. He tried to locate a mechanic shop but there was not any. Then we came out of the car. The gentleman, the machinist asked the driver for the repairing box. The driver gave him the box and there he played an important role in repairing the car. It got half an hour to get fully repaired. When we were just pulling the door of the car, then, there suddenly, a motorcycle came in high speed and got stuck to the large Banyan tree. There was a man who was riding it and who got a deep wound on his head. After viewing that, we ran fastly towards the man. He was bleeding very fast. There the gentlewoman, the doctor, who was with us, played an important role by giving temporary treatment to him, and we quickly got in the car to take him to the nearest hospital where he could be treated and be saved. The driver located the nearest hospital and we took the injured man to the hospital. We prayed to god for the well-being of his life. After some time the nurse came to us to inform that the doctor was calling us. We moved to the doctor's cabin. He told us that the man was out of danger. We thanked him for saving the man's life. He told us to thank the gentlewoman not to him as, because of her temporary treatment only, the man was saved. Then after, we informed his parents.
When the man got to his sense he thanked us for saving his life, when he was thanking only, his father and mother came moaning to meet their son. So, we got out of the room. There we saw that four bodyguards were guarding outside the room. Then, we got to know that he was the son of the deputy minister. When we were walking to our car, one of the bodyguards ran to us, informing us that we were asked by the minister and his wife. So, we went to meet them. They thanked us for saving his son's life. The minister and his wife asked us to wish whatever we want. But we refused the proposal as we were only fulfilling the responsibility of helping others. He gave his card and told us that whenever we wanted any kind of help, we could contact him. Thereafter, we moved to our different paths but were contacted to each other.
From the above story, we got to know that when we have got the ability from God to help others then we should surely help others. We should not wait for others to help a needy person. When we will help others then only we should expect any help from others. Please can anyone just correct the tense, words, voice or grammar of my story?

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*another was a gentleman too

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*Our car suddenly got

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*there were no shops nearby

Answer 2

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