English, asked by monajain987622, 1 year ago

Lying on bed swami realized with
A shudder that it is Monday
Mourning. It looked as though only an
Moment ago it has been the last
Period over Friday. He hoped that an
Earthquake will reduce the school to dust...editing


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Answered by santy2
34

In editing this paragraph we need to correct the grammatical errors and the spelling mistakes.

The edited paragraph is given below:

Lying on bed Swami realized with a shudder that it was  Monday morning. It looked as though a moment ago it had been the last period of  Friday.He hoped that an earthquake would reduce the school to dust.

The bold words in italics are the edited parts of the text.

The corrections are both spelling and grammatical.

There are more grammatical errors than the spelling mistakes.

Answered by aqibkincsem
16

Answer:

Lying on bed Swami realised with a shudder that it was Monday morning. It looked as though only a moment ago it had been the last period on Friday.

He hoped that an earthquake would reduce the school to dust. Grumbling he got up from the bed and went down to have breakfast with his family.

His little sister was also ready and looked excited to start her first day at school.

Explanation:

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