Music, asked by debashreeghosh, 1 year ago

My poem

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Our life is full of colour from start

And red is a colour that comes from our heart

Blue is the colour that drip from Eyes

But black is the colour that makes us tell lies

And suitable heading also

sanjay351: ohhhh

debashreeghosh: Can I add these lines also

Brainlynostalgia: Which lines?

debashreeghosh: Green is the green is the colour of jealousy and rage. but grey is the colour that comes with old age. violet is the colour most misunderstood. and white is the colour that

debashreeghosh: Makes us feel good

Brainlynostalgia: Yeah nice. You can add that also. But i think you should rearrange thevlimes in a sequence that explains whole life. Overall poem is good.

debashreeghosh: Thanks

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Answered by Rishita1222004

colours of life suitable title
yaar excellent lines loved it very much
keep it up and make such more creations

Answered by RabbitPanda

Heta frnd....bht achi poem h...as one said in comments u can provide a title the journey of life nd some more lines also....#dont get offended just a suggestion.

@skb

debashreeghosh: Green is the green is the colour of jealousy and rage. but grey is the colour that comes with old age. violet is the colour most misunderstood. and white is the colour that

RabbitPanda: Thnx 4 brainlist

debashreeghosh: Welcome

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