# My question is related to English grammar
# Write in your answer all my mistakes in this formal letter and allot me marks out of 20
# Question is
You are living in a village along national highway. The state roadways bus doesn't stop near your village. write a letter to the general manager, state roadway for, requesting a bus stop for your village. Give all the reasons why you need a bus stop there. you are Anna from gokalpur , district
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↪So here we will go with u r mistakes :-
↪Firstly u r starting should be awesome it should be like 'It will be a great favour if you will publish my opinion '
↪In 8th line ->It should be' children are going'
↪In 12th line ->It should be like 'If a bus stop should be there in our village then it helps.. '
↪Last line ->It should be like 'and kindly provide a bus stop '
↪Now it's turn for u r marks
↪congrats u got 18/20 :-)
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↪So here we will go with u r mistakes :-
↪Firstly u r starting should be awesome it should be like 'It will be a great favour if you will publish my opinion '
↪In 8th line ->It should be' children are going'
↪In 12th line ->It should be like 'If a bus stop should be there in our village then it helps.. '
↪Last line ->It should be like 'and kindly provide a bus stop '
↪Now it's turn for u r marks
↪congrats u got 18/20 :-)
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