Question

place /our/lives/music/important/his/in/an​

Answer 1

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here is your answer mate!!

since the question doesnt have any comma. The answer should be:

Music has an important place in our lives

You misspelled the word. It should be 'has' instead of his

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Answer 2

music has an important place in our lives.