Question

Please add two sentences to my story of a begger women. " She wore a Dirty Torn SAREE , holding a Faded Bouquet at exit of platform 7 , her gaze piercing the hearts of those in love with this Unemotional City of Mumbai........​

Answer 1

Hi my name is vinayak Kachrawat VIII B

Answer 2

Her attire was not very pleasing. She wore a dirty torn saree, holding a faded bouquet at the exit of platform 7, her gaze pierced the hearts of those in love with the(correction) unemotional city of Mumbai. Appearing to be just another old lady, of the millions that dwelled in the slums of this metropolitan city.

Ps. It's really hard to add lines without knowing the context of the story, sorry if i was unhelpful.