Question

Please check the below Paragraph Overnight Journey by Bus Travelling is my passion. Every year I and my family visit a new place. Every year we went by train or by plane. But this year we went to Digha by bus. We booked our ticket from the booking counter two days before the journey. It was thrilling moment for me to go to a place by bus. We got up in the bus at 8.30 p.m. The departure time of the bus was 9.00 pm. The bus was fully AC and luxurious. After us many people got in the bus. Due to luxury bus, standing was not allowed so we sat very comfortably. The bus was fully packed. I got my seat near the window side. At 9.00 pm the bus started. At 10.00 pm we had our dinner. After some time the light goes off we feel sleepy and sleep. Many stoppages were crossed. Many people were got up from the stoppage. At 7.00 am I woke up, the driver said we were quiet near to Digha. At 7.30 am we reached our destination. The experiencing of travelling by bus is very good for me and my family. This will remain in my heart forever.

Answer 1

You can check each sentence with the following;
 
•    Traveling by bus is my passion.
•    Every year my family and I visit a new place.
•    Every year we go by plane or train.
•    But, this year we went Digha by bus.
•    Ok
•    It was a thrilling experience for me to travel to a place by bus.
•    We boarded the bus at 8.30 p.m.
•    Ok
•    The bus was air conditioned and luxurious
•    After us, many people boarded the bus.
•    The bus was fully occupied, but the seats were comfortable.
•    I got my seat near the window.
•    At 9.00 pm the bus started and at 10.00 pm we had our dinner.
•    After some time, the lights were switched off and we slept.
•    At 7.00 a.m. I woke up and the driver said we were near Digha.
•    Finally at 7.30 a.m., we reached our destination.
•    I enjoyed the traveling and the event  will remain in my mind forever.