Question

please  correct the following passage
it is vital that we connect with young people and teach them the skills that belie will be the important to them in their adult lives .we need to hook into what motivates the normal teenager and build on that.
the government's proposals to help tackle this problem include an increased role for vocational training and a significantly increase in the use of information technology

Answer 1

It is vital that we connect with young people and teach them the skills that will be important to them in their adult lives. We need to hook into what motivates the normal teenager and build on that.
The government's proposals to help tackle this problem includes an increased role for vocational training and a significant increase in the use of informative technology

Answer 2

It is vital that we connect with young people and teach them the skills that will be important to them in their adult lives. We need to hook into what motivates the normal teenager and build on that.
The government's proposals to help tackle this problem includes an increased role for vocational training and a significant increase in the use of informative technology.