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My name is Shan. I am a dancer. I am from india. I am 20 years old. I am very like dancing. I am loves many traditional dance and modern dance. I am always dances everyday whether it's from my unclear hum or the bridle song I play it deliberately.

I also have partner. His name is Nian. She is beautiful dancer from china. She stay a temporary in India. She is here to learn Indian classical dance. I helped her to master the Indian classical dance called Khatak. She is learns very fast. I feel good that he is learning fast. But I also feel sad when she returns to his country. Because without realizing it, I actually like Nian.
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My name is Shan. I am a dancer. I am from India. I am 20 years old. I am very like dancing. I love traditional dance and modern dance. I am always dancing every day whether it's from my unclear hum or the bridle song I play it deliberately.

I also have a partner. His name is Nian. She is a beautiful dancer from china. She stays temporary in India. She is here to learn Indian classical dance. I helped her to master the Indian classical dance called Khatak. She is learning very fast. I feel good that he is learning fast. But I also feel sad when she returns to his country. Because without realizing it, I actually like Nian.

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