Question

please help!!!!! i have my English exam in 1 hour!!!!


The beginning


Where am I…? how I ended up here…?why my hands and legs are tied up? Did I abduct by someone? “whatever it is I need to escape from here before the kidnapper appear” I look around and I saw a knife from a distance away. “ why the knife is this soo much near? Do the kidnapper wants me to escape?” I had a lot of questions inside my mind, but I don’t have the enough time to answer it so, I grab the knife and released my self from it. I heard a foots step getting louder... louder and louder. so, I had no choice, I grab that knife for the defense. The kidnapper appeared. with a black hat, and brown coat and red heals . wait, what? A red heals? A lady who kidnapped me?. She pointed a gun on my head. 'lub' and 'dub. ' I can even hear my heart beat this loud. I can only see her smile. She removes her hat. I couldn’t expect it… Is- th-at -m-e!!? what I say was myself pointed a gun at me. She told “I won’t be easy one you before you know the beginning”. When I heard her voice, my memories become shadow like before”. When I opened my eyes I’m alone in the beach. Its makes me feel like a déjà vu or is it really happened in my life?. Its started to rain suddenly so, I took my red car and left that place but suddenly my car is out of gas and its stopped on an old eerie bungalow. I couldn’t stay on the car for so long so, I left the car and knock the main door of that bungalow. “Creek…” the door opens by itself. I look around the bungalow its fully empty except that phone “maybe I shouldn’t choose that beginning which is the ending of my life” . the phone started to ring on its own. So, without a hesitation I attend the phone call. I heard someone saying “please... help me!! “ which is really similar to me I ask that lady on the phone to give me the address I’ll call the police for you. She gave it but… the address is exactly the same place where I am standing right now. I asked her again to give the address properly but suddenly the call got cut. At that time I only I had two choices one is left that place immediately or else.. save her somehow. I took my decision which I really regret now. Which is I really shouldn’t try to save this girl who is pointing the gun on my head…


is my narration good? give me some advice, please!! thank you!!

Answer 1

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Wow such a nice narration

Answer 2

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Yay good narration hope you do well