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Answered by Rythm14
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Answer :-

Edited passage :-

Common wealth gold medalist Heena Sindhu used to watch her uncle repair all kinds of guns in her neighborhood and developed fancy for it. And by 2006, when she took up shooting her family members didn't think she could win laurels for her country.

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a) it's - her

b) each -- all

c) in -- by

d) where -- when

e) should -- could

Answered by Auяoяà
39

Answer:

Edited Passage:

Common wealth gold medalist Heena Sindhu used to watch her uncle repair many kinds of guns in her neighbourhood and developed fancy for it. And by 2006, where she took up shooting her family members didn't think she could win laurels for her country.

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  • golden is replaced by gold.
  • its is replaced by her as here for Heena her will be used properly.
  • each had been replaced by many as here guns is used ,so its plural,hence many is used.
  • in is changed to by
  • should is replaced by could.

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