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Plz tell me if this is good or not

A young Dutch woman of German-Jewish origin. She is the youngest child of Mr. and Mrs. Frank. Anne Frank is bold, intelligent, charming, outgoing, and, even under the worst circumstances, funny. Over the course of the diary, she grows from a spoiled, somewhat naive young girl to a self-aware young woman. Although she has little political knowledge at the beginning of the diary, she grows to question the point of the war. During her time in the Annex, she suffers from boredom, despair, and the petty persecution of those around her. She also discovers a wealth of good qualities in herself. In the play, "The Diary of Anne Frank" by Frances Goodrich and Albert Hackett, Anne is a bold, intelligent, and outgoing young lady.

Answer 1

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Ya... it's good... u wrote very well.

But I personally think that you should explain it a little bit more.

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Answer 2

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This is pretty good. The wording is on point, along with the use of advanced vocabulary. Overall, great job.