Question

'Private tutions are a necessary evil'. Give your views FOR the topic.
can anyone help me i want n essay for the topic consisting of atleast 350 words

Answer 1

Hi friend,

The following is your answer. I'm giving you only one example, it should help you well enough to write another one or two paragraphs before you go to the conclusion.

Even with my much meager knowledge, I can confidently assert that  'Private tuitions are a necessary evil'. These private tuitions are here to stay even though they are evil. As long as we have our present system of education and exams, as long as we lay undue stress on marks and percentages, as long as we have lakhs appearing for competitive entrance exams,parents and students will have to run to private tutors.

Today even the best of students need guidance and have to know the art of tackling questions in any exam. Schools have too many students in a class. Some schools do not have enough or competent teachers to cope with 45-50 students. So parents are left with no choice but to seek the aid of private tutors and tuitions.

In every city private tuitions are growing in number. People advertise for tutors. Admission in the best coaching schools is extremely expensive and difficult. It is so shocking to see parents taking their 3 yrs old to coaching classes for admissions to nursery schools!

Private tuition and coaching classes have become an important part of a student's life. The popularity of private tuition is indeed a direct fallout of and testament to the inefficient system of education in the country where there is a premium on academic excellence. This evil may have affected the childhood of the children. Nevertheless it has helped to shape their future careers by making them good professionals in their chosen field.

Hope it helps!

Answer 2

Private tuitions are institutions which offer academic coaching for students apart from the training  given  at  their  schools.  The  existence  of  these  institutions  is  questioned  by  many.  They debate whether it is correct on the parents’ part to send their children to such places. I do believe that these institutions and the servicestheyprovide are overpriced, but I do not believe that they should  be  done  away  with.  On  the  contrary,  I  believe  that  students  sometimes  do  need  help  with their academic work. That’s when private tuitions step in and give thema helping hand.Gone are thedayswhen the onlyvocation of an average student was studies. Today, apart from  academics,  students are  madeto  partake  in  many  activities.  They are  allottedmarks  for participation  in  sports  and  for  creative  activities such  as drawing,  painting,  dancing  and singing. The studentshave a lot on their plate and often find itdifficult to give undivided attention towards studies. Schools  expect  them  to  be  all-rounders  who  excel  at  everything  they  do.  Under  such circumstances, it would be helpful for the studentsto receive some help for their studies.Schools   mainly   function   on   the   efficiency   of   their   teaching   staff. Many   schools are understaffed.  Hence,they  find  it  difficult  to  cater  to  each  student  individually.  It  is  difficult  to address academic problems of the studentsat a personal level.  Therefore, students need to turn to someone for their problems. Private tuitions usually have a favourable student–teacherratio. The private tutor can help the studentswith their studies and give them undivided attention. The tutor can manage the studentsat a micro level and monitor theirprogress at a closer range. When  it  comes  to  studies,  having  a  private  tutor  also  gives the  studentsa  variety  in learning. Tutors  cangive students  fresh  perspectives  in  learning  as  compared  to  the  techniques taught in schools. They nurture the students’ thirst for knowledge away from the noisy din of their classrooms. Private tuitions provide an environment where the studentscan express their doubts without any inhibitions or the fear of ridicule. It is therefore a boon for introverted students who often feel shy in class. I strongly believe that private tuitions should exist alongside academic institutions such as schools and colleges because it provides an alternative to classroom education and can bolster the child’s confidence in academics. AgainstPrivate tuitions are institutionswhich offer academic coaching for students apart from the training  given  at  their  schools.  The  existence  of  these  institutions  is  questioned  by  many.They debate whether it is correct on the parents’ part to send their children to such places. Though the very existence of private tutoring points to the inadequacies in our academic institutions, I do not  

ICSEX|  English LanguageBoard Paper -2011 -that “Private tuitions are anecessary evil”. On the contrary, I believe that these institutions destroy the very spirit of learning which is innate in every child. Private  tutoring  involves  employing  a  coach  to  train  the  student  in  the  comfort  of the students’ home.They have fancy degrees and often charge an exorbitant amount of money for less than  20  hours  in  a  month. I  oppose  this  practise  for severalreasons.  I  believe  that  it  gives  undue advantage  to  a  privileged  child  as  compared  to  his  lessprivileged  counterpart.  It  is  unfortunate that  with  money  somebody  is  given  an  edge  over  the  others.  In  a  world  where  opportunities are rare,  the  underprivileged  student  may  never geta  chance  to  come  up  in  life because the  rich student has access and the meansto them. It alsodestroys the ability of the child to think forhimself. By being spoon fed by the tutor, the  childrefuses  to  make  any  effort on  his own.  The  innate  ability  to question  and  ponder  isdestroyed by the private tutor. The child will then become unnaturally dependent on the tutor forhis academic  needs. It  promotes  the  idea  that  nothing  can  be  earned  in  life and onlybought.  The children internalisethe wrong notionthat success can be bought and not earned.Tutors also swindle parents by chargingexorbitant amountsof money to tutor studentsfor less  than  20hours  a  month.  Some  parents  foolishly  trust  such  people  and  expect  them  to miraculously improve their children’s grades. The  value  of  school  teachers  also  diminishes  in  the eyes of the students. They do not respect the teachers and may not pay attention in class because they believe thattheir academic success is safe in the hands of their private tutors.Owing  to  these  reasons,  I  strongly  oppose  the  practice  of  private  tutoring.  I  urge the studentsto study independently without taking help from these so-calledt utors.