Question

RAP by me - ✍️

Zindagi meri shehnai
Hum bajjein in raaston mein
Jaise hum shehnai
Iss dard ko toh sehna hi
Poori zindagi bus dard dard dard humne jhela hi

Hum bajjein in raaston mein shehnai
Jahan pyaar wahan naffrat toh rehna hi
In saanpon ke beech mujhe rehna nhi
Jo fame chahte mujhe dena nhi
Kaali raatein, aajkal zyada sota nhi
Ye diss rappers, mumma k sofa pe hee
Insta ke fans inke show par nhi
Hum bajte, hum bajre.. Ha sober nahi
Roker hum aate, tab hasne lagte
Haskar hum jaate, tab rone lagte
Sahi galat , humpe dono ye jachte
Insaan hai, galtiya hone lagte

Zindagi meri shehnai
Hum bajjein in raaston mein
Jaise hum shehnai
Iss dard ko toh sehna he
Poori zindagi bus dard dard dard humne jhela he

Shukriya
Pehle bahut maine dukh jiya
Jo bhi kiya man se
Baki maine sukh diya
Mere dost
Mere Headphones pe sunne wale
dosto ko shukriya
Akela par lagta hai army k sath
Savera ab hota hai studio se bahar
Hustle se Victory Lap
Khada kiya maine Qutub Minar
Aitihasik kitaab
Panne pe panne pa panna bhara
Gir gir ke phir he chadne laga
Rap ke siwa mujhe mann nahi laga

Zindagi meri......​

Answer 1

Bruh, it's not that bad!

You can do better.