English, asked by Ashley121, 11 months ago

Rate this poem, URGENT
I need to submit this for a competition and I know it’s a homework website but please give an honest review about this poem. I wrote it in five minutes, it was very urgent and rushed but please still be honest about it.

Runs terror through the blackest of eyes
Takes a visit under the darkest of skies
It may find it’s interest in broad day light
Those stone hearted, will tumble in fright
Smiling, it walks, charmingly down the lane
Attracts all those in pain, all of his to gain
Realization sets in their brain, too late
Burning flames, charcoal fire is what awaits
If only they realized their early mistake
Death would instead taste its own stake

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Answered by shrikrishan3
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Answer:

nice one it's a great work, keep on doing and you will be on the peak one day

Answered by smysore2015
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Two words need replacing, I have mentioned it in ur previous question also.
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