Question

Rate this poem, URGENT
I need to submit this for a competition and I know it’s a homework website but please give an honest review about this poem. I wrote it in five minutes, it was very urgent and rushed but please still be honest about it.

Runs terror through the blackest of eyes
Takes a visit under the darkest of skies
It may find it’s interest in broad day light
Those stone hearted, will tumble in fright
Smiling, it walks, charmingly down the lane
Attracts all those in pain, all of his to gain
Realization sets in their brain, too late
Burning flames, charcoal fire is what awaits
If only they realized their early mistake
Death would instead taste its own stake

Answer 1

Answer:

Good. But what is the theme?

Explanation:

Answer 2

Look, the poem is good, but two words need replacing.

-“Darkest” instead of “Blackest”

-“Tremble” instead of “Tumble”