Question

Read the draft of a body paragraph in an argumentative essay. Executive Order 9066 was a response to suspicion and prejudice. In the days following the Japanese attack on Pearl Harbor, military commanders were concerned because most Japanese Americans lived on the West Coast, where many military installations were also located. As a result, nearly all Japanese Americans on the West Coast were relocated and interned. This was clearly unconstitutional. How could the writer improve this draft? by moving the first sentence to the end of the paragraph by using fewer big words and making the sentences shorter by adding evidence that suspicion and prejudice were involved by creating another paragraph with evidence of unconstitutionality

Answer 1

Explanation:

The attack on Pearl Harbor also launched a rash of fear about national security, especially on the West Coast. In February 1942, just two months later, President Roosevelt, as commander-in-chief, issued Executive Order 9066 that resulted in the internment of Japanese Americans.

Answer 2

D: By creating another paragraph with evidence of unconstitutionality

Explanation:

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