Read the paragraph. Even though my life is very busy, I spend as much time as I can with my family. I often ask my dad, who is an excellent athlete, to play soccer with me. I also enjoy taking walks, baking desserts, and playing cards with my mom. However, nothing is better than watching movies with my loyal, black cat, Max. How should this paragraph be revised so that it is correct? The word “soccer” should be capitalized. The word “cat” should be capitalized. The comma after “however” should be removed. The comma after “loyal” should be removed.
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Answer: Even though my life is very busy, I spend as much time as I can with my family. I often ask dad, who is an excellent athlete to play soccer with me. I also enjoy going on walks, baking desserts ,and playing cards with my mom. However, nothing is better than watching movies with my loyal, black cat, Max.
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The comma after "loyal" should be removed.
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