Question

rectify the error
listen to them,I see the two distinct worlds
won of the family,caught in the
web of poor,burdened by the stigma
of cast in which they are born


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Answer 1

Answer:

listening to them I see two distinct worlds

one of the family caught in the web of the poverty burdened by the stigma of caste in which they are born

Answer 2

The sentences have been corrected as follows:

Listening to them,I see the two distinct worlds

one of the families, caught in the

web of poverty, burdened by the stigma

of caste in which they are born

• The form of the verb in the first sentence should be present participle as the action is in the continuous form.

• In the second sentence, 'won' is an incorrect usage as it means victory. Here, we are referring to one family. Since 'one of the' is used, it refers to one family out of many families and so the correct usage would be 'families'.

• In the third sentence, a noun is required in place of the adjective, poor.

• In the last sentence, usage of 'cast' is incorrect as it means discharging or projecting in a direction. Here, we are talking about the caste of people such as Brahmins, Kshatriyas, etc.