Question

Rewrite, punctuating the given interchanges appropriately. (4M)
i am feeling sick sis i cried out from under my blanket
the fan in my room was switched off yet i was shivering under a mountain of 4 blankets
my sister half jeering and half irritated mumbled hey but im sweating profusely lets have
the speed turned down maybe at 4 or 3
no no nooooo i shrieked as loud as i could with my croaking voice to invite my mother to
speak for me
my sister begged please kanan please do not shout like this
she then offered fine you sleep here i'll move into mothers room for tonight
thank you karishma i breathed a sigh of relief reaching out to my younger sisters hand but
she had already stomped away with an annoyed smirk on her face

Answer 1

"i am feeling sick sis." i cried out from under my blanket.

1. the fan in my room was switched off,yet i was shivering under a mountain of 4 blankets. my sister half jeering, and half, irritated ,mumbled hey but im sweating profusely lets have the speed turned down maybe at 4 or 3."no no nooooo" i shrieked as loud as i could with my croaking voice to invite my mother to speak for me.my sister begged," please kanan please do not shout like this"?she then offered" fine you sleep here i'll move into mothers room for tonight".thank you karishma i breathed a sigh of relief reaching out to my younger sisters hand but she had already stomped away with an annoyed.

I may be wrong somewhere any Cam comment on it if l am wrong