Question

Rewrite this paragraph. Use adjectives and adjectival phrases to make it sound more interesting.
We went on a school trip to a zoo last week. We saw a lot of animals and birds. I liked the monkeys. All preferred the turtles. Shemarr was afraid of the snakes. It was hot so we bought drinks. I was tired when I got home..

Answer 1

Answer:

We went on a school trip to a zoo last week. We saw a lot of wild animals and chirpy birds. I liked the playful monkeys. All preferred the slow turtles. Shemarr was afraid of the scary snakes. It was hot so we bought cool drinks. I was tired when I got home..