Question

. Rewrite this story, changing the long sentences, to shorter ones, wherever
appropriate, to improve the feeling of action.
I was strolling along on the way to home, stopping often to look for butterflies on
the plants along the footpath and to pick up interesting stones and feathers, when
all at once the sky darkened. I looked up and saw huge black clouds moving quickly
from the hills down towards the city.
I quickened my pace and I felt the rain begin to fall, lightly at first and then heavier
and heavier, so I began to run fast as I didn't want to get wet. The rain continued
to fall harder and harder and before I could reach home, my hair and clothes were
wet through.
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