Question

soon the sun has set how these sentences improves

Answer 1

The sun has set now.

Answer 2

The flow of a sentence is very important while writing it. If the flow of the sentence is not correct, it sounds bad to the reader or the listener.

Often we use sentences where the flow is not good and the rear losses the interest of reading.  

If we write the given sentence, we have to improve the flow, and it should be written as “The sun has set now.” This sounds much better while reading.