Story writing on ( mysterious place)
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HEYA !!!!!!!
I am supposed to write the beginning only . I dont know how to create a mystery atmosphere .. please help me , i welcome negative comments.
I open my eyes, i see nothing. Everything was pitch black. I stretch my arm across. Grabbing anything that was in front of me - nothing.
Sweat dripped down my cheeks , my lungs are starting to lose air. I can't breathe. I grab anything I could, something icy cold pricks my fingers. A burst of hope fills me, I grab hold of it. , it was rusty and small. I twist it, light rays came bursting through. The next area was bright . Finally ! Wait , I hear cheering...
Please help me change or improve it. thanks :
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dear Merl ID delete ho gyi hai purani wali so I am gaining point....very sorry....
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and thankyou for points.....