Question

the following passage has not been edited there is an error

: the world Sparrow Day is celebrate
: on March 20 the rationale to celebrating
: the world Sparrow day was not only
;to commemoration the event for a day ,
:but also to using it as a platform
: to highlight the need to conserve
:sparrows as well as urban diversity

Answer 1

second line must be " to celebrate " not as to celebrating.

Answer 2

The corrected passage is as follow :
The World Sparrow Day is celebrated on 20 th of March , the reason to celebrate the World Sparrow Day was not only to commemoration the event for a day , but also to use it as a platform to highlight the need to conserve sparrows as well as urban diversity .