the water dripping from his face, the boy looked at her.(split the sentences)
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The boy looked at her. Water was dripping from his face.
It is better to change the sequence of the sentences, because then they make better sense. The order of sentences is important. It is one of the elements that makes any piece of text sound organized.
Also, the article ‘the’ before the word ‘water’ is unnecessary.
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