Question

There is error in each line. Correct the word.
Anne is in need of a true friend with
Who she can share her joys and
Sorrows. She has loving parent and about
thirty people whom she can call friend
When she is with his friends she
could talk about matters of everyday
but cannot share her feelings.​

Answer 1

answer:

Anne needs a true friend with whom she can share her joy and sorrow. She has loving parents and about thirty people whom she can call friends. When she is with her friends she could talk about matters of everyday but she cannot share her feelings.

Answer 2

The errors in each line have been detected and corrected as follows:

(1) Anne is in need of a true friend with

(2) whom she can share her joys and

(3) sorrows. She has loving parents and about

(4) thirty people whom she can call friends

(5) When she is with her friends she

can talk about matters of everyday

but cannot share her feelings.​

* Similar error is present in the second and fourth sentence. Usage of the pronoun( who) is incorrect. The pronoun 'whom' is used to denote object of a verb or a preposition.

* In the third sentence, 'parents' is correct as it is referring to both father and mother.

* Two errors are present in the last sentence:

The passage talks about a girl so usage of 'his' is incorrect.

The sentence is in the simple present tense so usage of could is incorrect. It is to be replaced by 'can'.