Question

what can be done to make the above story interesting there was a girl she was fond of learning her parents sent her to school she would study regularly she would score good marks in this way she study hard and stood on her own feet​

Answer 1

You can write that her parents gift her a mobile phone. After this her marks were not good enough. Her parents worried all the time. One day her best friend came and make her understand that she have to do hard work and score good marks.

Answer 2

You can add some terrible incident and then end with funny portion or may just give happy ending

Terrible incident and funny end will surely make story stunning