What is the best way to correct the parallelism in this sentence?
She had a lovely house, many friends, and her body of work was impressive.
Question 9 options:
Her house was lovely, and she had many friends and an impressive body of work.
She had a lovely house, where she entertained many friends and where her
impressive body of work was created.
She had a lovely house, many friends, and an impressive body of work.
She had a lovely house, many friends, and a body of work, which was impressive.
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Parallelism is a grammatical term for arranging words of identical or equivalent syntactical constructions in corresponding clauses. It can be written in many ways.
The options 3 and 4 of the given options seem to be right -
Option 4 - She had a lovely house, many friends, and a body of work, which was impressive.
Option 3 - She had a lovely house, many friends, and an impressive body of work.
The options 3 and 4 of the given options seem to be right -
Option 4 - She had a lovely house, many friends, and a body of work, which was impressive.
Option 3 - She had a lovely house, many friends, and an impressive body of work.
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