Question

What is the edit/revised of this and what speech editing principle used?
May 15 of thus year, I woke up with a happy heart. I thought a myself "when I reach 50 year old,60 or beyond ,I will look back to this day and smile." Then,I paid attention to my college graduation picture,farmed on a 4*6 decorative wood edging emblazoned with beautiful memories I reaches .For it ,and held it closely and uttered m,"10 years and I think you did a preety job!
I slowly put it back to the side table,off to my working station across my sliding window to fulfill in my daily routine :journal writing.

Answer 1

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