Question

where can I improve pls tell. it's my assignment. I wanna get a really good grade so pls don't report.
tell honestly and feel free to point out any mistakes.
I only wanna improve that's all.​

Answer 1

Answer:

the shading is not as good.. to improve shading use the light coming from one side, either from above or from below.

The lower lip is too thick so slim it or you can use shading to make it slim.

Explanation:

Try to portray a lil bit of smile in those lips. they impress the observer.

i will give it 7 out of 10..

nice try.

Answer 2

your background shape is not proper

Explanation:

I also so love to drawing

sorry for comment but it is true